Post 7: Focus Group

We assembled our focus group which consisted of students and a teacher varying in age and genders to expand our range of responces and improvements that could be made. We assessed the feedback given and made some changes to our piece. Such as the ending, we have focused more on the chasing element. and instead of making the main character, Nick shoot himself at the end with a blackout, we create a cliff hanger to whether he shoots himself or someone else.